a. wake (
nonfictional) wrote2024-06-01 04:09 pm
echo opt-in

► A quick and dirty explanation:
Alan was able to survive and navigate the horrors of the Dark Place by utilizing visions as inspiration to push his story forward. Some were Alan using pieces of what makes a good story, while others were little snippets and glimpses into other people's lives that he was able to twist and use. The barge is a far cry from the Dark Place but since it's full of stories and characters Alan will still be able to tap into this ability to see these echoes on occasion. All he has to do is line up a few points of light that manifest for him and he can essentially eavesdrop on people!
What he'll actually see varies. It can be two people having a conversation. It could be an internal monologue. It might even be a warped interpretation of what actually happened.
► Mechanics in-game:
- Echoes can be anything, so long as they're relevant to your character: a navelgazing moment between them and their crush in canon, an argument with another character in the hallway of the barge, helpful advice as a fleeting thought. Anything's on the table - if you have a life from a breach you want Alan to be aware of, for example, it's fair game!
- The laws of drama and a good story apply: this isn't an exact science. Alan's subconscious can easily dial up the drama and change the tone for a better hook. It has to contain a grain of truth, but things can still get jumbled. If you want to mix it up, let me know and we'll coordinate.
- These are just small snippets of feeling, not whole memories. Alan will not be able to go into your dreams or witness an entire conversation or anything like that. Just a few juicy tidbits!
- Alan will be writing all of these down as he sees them where they will remain in his cabin. This is for his eyes only. If there is some sort of plot involving these pages getting stolen down the line, I'll contact folks beforehand and offer an opt out, etc.
- Alan will only see echoes around floods and ports for the time being. As he gains more balance/reaches enlightenment the closer he is to graduation, he'll be able to see them more frequently.
- This is entirely opt-in - by default, I'm going to assume people don't want Alan accidentally prying into your character's life, but comment here if you're into it and we can set things up.
►Opt-in:

masterlist;
Matt Murdock - hallway fight (hospital edition) - echo thread
Cloud Strife - echo comment - echo thread
Pyotr Stepanovich - echo comment - echo thread
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Journal:
Echo information: Arthur is just Tragic Backstories Georg so hmu and we can definitely noodle something more specific than just uh CW child death
Name: Hunter
Journal:
Echo information: Some nightmare of humanitarianism Belos made him do; meeting and betraying (and trying to kill) Amity; getting stuck in an illusory memory maze with his bff.
Name: Doug Eiffel
Journal:
Echo information: You're canon familiar so we can talk about the best/stupidest ideas. Toothpaste siege, chatting with Hera literally any time (only the vision shows Eiffel talking to a very real but nebulously describable human woman), etc.
Name: Richter Belmont
Journal:
Echo information: His mum's death, generally any time attacking vampires (feel free to misinterpret the vampires however), his aunt's death.
Name: Stolas
Journal:
Echo information: One of the many many sex scenes with Blitz, an argument with his wife that turns abusive (towards Stolas), something positive with his daughter whom he loves SO much.
Contact: you got my discord bruh 👍
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Echo information: 1) Father-son drama. Alan is welcome to snippets from their various arguments. Particularly dramatic moments include Stepan basically disowning him by hysterically yelling "I curse you in my name from now on and for evermore!" He can also get Pyotr yelling (distortion, Pyotr was always calm and devil may care during these arguments but to add to the drama-) about being "sent by post" as a child, forced to live in poverty (distortion; he never lived in poverty but, again, DRAMA) and raised by cruel strangers (distortion, they were strangers, but not particularly cruel-) while Stepan lived in luxury... and then gambled away what was supposed to be Pyotr's inheritance that was left to him by his deceased mother.
2) Gay drama. Pyotr's dramatic declaration of love: "You are beautiful! . . . You are the sun, and I am your worm." The reality is that Pyotr is basically a stalker saying crazy stuff to someone who has no interest in him at this point, but Alan can get only the... intensity... of Pyotr's devotion to this... individual... and make of it what he will, as a writer in search of inspiration.
Contact: plurk
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Echo information: Learning Abel's real name Ethan or learning anything about his history with his partner/ex Cain in any detail. I can plot with you about any of these things in greater detail as necessary.
Contact: Plurk
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Journal:
Echo information: Alan's welcome to snippets of most of Sweeney's stuff; other incarnations might be the most fun to play with. We can chat about options if you'd like to do that (so I won't write an essay here). He has lots of canon shame about cowardice, and has had breach lives with lots of good and bad.
I'll happily try to include random thoughts in some of my tags that you can take or leave, and I'm always down for plotting if you're interested in something more in depth.
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Journal:
Echo information: 1) being handed a Keyblade and essentially told he had to do a highly specific and extremely lengthy vigil that he had already did/would have done because closed timeloops (feel free to have the Keyblade become any artifact of significant power), 2) facing down an amnesiac Xehanort and having his heart removed via Keyblade, 3) any of a number of other showdowns with Keyblade wielders! feel free to have them be as vague as you'd like or if you're after a specific vibe, hit me up /o/
Name: Lahabrea
Journal:
Echo information: 1) the phrase "I am become thee, memory and mind." "And I, thee" spoken by two different voices in turn, 2) Lahabrea tearing out a portion of his soul in order to be rid of a nascent corruption from an outside source
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Echo information:
1) Day in the life from WWI, which could be loud & scary or boring & miserable or something happy but tense from leave/in a reserve trench.
2) Day in the existence from his years getting tormented in the Dreamlands, which would naturally be a very disconnected/distorted/confusing scene.
3) For something positive, him being rescued from Dreamlands Prison by a funny little frog guy <3
Contact: you've got me at
Echo 1
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Echo information:
-This conversation between Lark and Will, as much of it as you might want to include. This can be the 'two people talking to each other' sort of scenes. They're both only wearing sweatpants, which is a little weird.
-You dropped your forgiveness scene between Hannibal and Will, from Will's perspective.
-Meat's back on the menu scene between Will and Bedelia, with the scene almost as depicted (just heavier silhouette on both of them and no background details).
Contact:Plurk! Feel free to ask me about any of these, or any other Hannibal scenes (tbh, a lot feel like they could be Casey-like noir-style scenes)
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Journal:
Echo information:
- Meeting the devil in a vision, weak and bleeding and looking like his dead husband. "Before it all went wrong, they said I was the most beautiful of them all." "You were." "But as well you know, beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and so I sometimes look like the most beautiful face that mortals have seen."
- Meeting the devil face to face and getting betrayed immediately. Truly who could have seen this coming.
"You were trying to atone me...but I didn't do anything wrong."
- Meeting his (not as dead as previously thought) husband again on the astral plane, between life and death, knowing her has to make a deal with the devil to go back and save their son. "I don't know how deeply you have sacrificed to do what must be done, but I know this: There is no god that strides this world that I worship more than I worship your heart. There is a power beyond the stars that you alone could find. And though you may be his, by working of foul magic, I vow this, I bear your name. I bear it on this stone. And one day, I will bring you home."
Name: Madelyne Pryor
Journal:
Echo information:
- Illyana Rasputin offering her rulership of Limbo, which is a sort of hell dimension shaped by its ruler's thoughts and feelings. "Why me?" "...Because when you shake us both, you can hear the broken glass in there - that's what it takes to rule this place."
- Scenes from a young Illyana's storybook, which translates their most recent shared story into an epic fantasy quest. "In the Little Goblin's quest to free herself, three Companions made themselves known. The Wolf, a compassionate spiritual warrior with a pure heart; the Moon Whisperer, a huntress and fierce protector of the innocent; and the Queen of Echoes, a powerful sorceress touched by madness."
- The climax of Dark Web: X-Men, in which Jean shares all her memories of their son Nathan. "I told you I wanted to heal our wounds, but you were too busy throwing rocks to hear me."
Any level of distortion is good with me!
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As a note, the moment Alan's ability hooks into any of YZ's memories, he will notice. He won't exactly care, but he may end up knocking on his door to talk to him about it.
+ a field of strange alien grasses that glow in colors human eyes cannot see in a place that is deep underground. there's strange butterflies that glitter like glass and a hum of insects and he will hear someone singing but the words were never made by any human tongue - almost sounds like a whale song of some kind.
+ nuclear winter scenario - sky is black, everyone is dressed in pre-bronze age gear, a lot of fighting
+ a bucket of KFC and a pack of beer while watching to worst of chinese soap opera drama
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Journal:
Echo information: One: This series of events as Hanna is passed through by a ghost and suffers a heart attack.
Two: Drug dealer stupid stuff that doesn't matter and is fun.
Contact: plurk
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Name: John Doe
Journal: greatoldjohn
Echo information: I would love Alan to maybe see him in his own Dark World/Place (potentially with Kayne), some of his time in the hospital while Arthur's in a coma, and something from the Dreamlands.
Name: Jamie
Journal: lost_first
Echo information: the death of his mother (killed by Peter, found by Jamie), finding Sal's body dead of crocodile, losing his hand (which will be doubly fun since he has it back now) when Peter cut it off
Name: Florian Leickenbloom
Journal: a_titanum
Echo information: (highlight for info: cw. plague, body horror) (age 12) crawling through a heap of corpses in an unlit basement looking for food, bringing his sister's corpse to the sea to throw it in, attempting to chop off his mother's leg to 'save' her from the infection and then mercy killing her when it goes Horrible, (age 27) his villain speech to the traders in the restaurant at the beginning of his Evil Plans
Name: Vincent
Journal: monsterstoyou
Echo information: I feel like Vincent's 'they look like monsters to you' could do a real number on Alan in an echo : ), but also his dying scene in the church where he's upset about what Claudia is doing and dies, maybe a scene where cw. child abuse (highlight to read) a young Vincent is watching Claudia be abused and he wants to do something but he can't, etc.
Contact: discord @ yarnzipan / plurk @ yarnzipan
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Journal:
Echo information: Hoo boy, there is SO much to choose from here...one question is, would you be willing to have Alan run across snippets of memories that are themselves already distorted/clashing? For instance, he might get two memories of the same event that go differently superimposed on top of each other, or scenes that seem "glitchy," or memories that are super disjointed and fuzzy due to mako poisoning. I'll put three suggestions here, but since you're canon-familiar, if you have any ideas for other things that could be fun, just lmk! I'm good with anything.
1. Any part of the infamous Nibelheim incident, of course. Could be Cloud's self-insert fanfic version, the actual version, or some combo of the two.
2. Aerith's death, OG style.
3. Cloud adopts Denzel; there's not actually much of this scene that Cloud was actually present for, but I figure maybe the echoes could either give Alan some context or...make some up XD the important thing really is the emotions attached to it, could even be snippets of various moments with Cloud and Denzel to get that across.
Contact: thessjuli on plurk!
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Echo information:
1. A flash of light. A lot of smoke. The smell of rotten eggs and a faint tinge of something chemical. The scattered memories of a four year old experiencing a nuclear meltdown and not entirely processing what's going on.
2. Someone flatlining. Hilbert trying his hardest to save him, giving oxygen, checking vitals, Hilbert doing whatever it takes to keep this man alive. All the while, in the back of his mind, he knows he's the reason why this man, why Sam Lambert is dying in the first place. He killed the man he's trying to save.
3. "Tell that to the fingernails you are not supposed to have."
Name: Nana Daiba
Journal:
Echo information:
1. Alone, two girls (Nana and Maya) hold a conversation. "If you're holding back just so you can remain the Banana-san that everyone loves...Daiba Nana. I won't forgive you."
2. Blinding yellow light, flooding the memory and damn near blinding the viewer. A near empty stage except for a fallen set piece, something that looks like a tower, and an actual factual giraffe. Nana and the giraffe have a conversation.
3. On a full stage, two girls fight. One of the girls is always Nana, but the other shifts between all of her classmates. Nana fights viciously, in her revue outfit, two swords in hand, cutting off a small pin on every one of her classmate's outfits, as their cloak falls to the floor again and again and again. This echo feels like it could take fifty seconds or fifty years.
Contact: gurl just hmu on discord
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Echo information: He's got plenty in his history to work with. Childhood abandonment and exploitation? With repeating cycles as he gets older? Check. Nefarious deeds of all sorts? Check? With the understanding that he will take any revelation of this as a violation? Up for it, but let's keep it timed correctly. Hit me up in PM!
Contact: discord: impuretale, or PM
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Journal:
Echo information: 1. This one will be a doozy. Cw for medical experiments, torture, blood:
Pretty distorted by clashing whispers, screams, and signs of a woman that looks like Aerith- close but not exactly- with over laying of needles, tubes, and a child's hand against glass, facing what looks like a lab. There's people, mostly men, in white lab coats walking by.
"An ancient" "A cetra" these are the two clearest phrases, whispered over and over until it becomes white noise.
For other echo ideas hmu and we can go from there! There's a bunch of memories that could apply depending on context!
Contact: nammah@plurk
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Journal:
Echo information: She's got a semi-comprehensive history writeup (and honestly her relevant history is a conga line of weird & often awful things happening to or around her, as vampires do), but that's also 4.5k words, so here's some options she's sensitive about.
CW on the first one for body horror, abuse, and assault.
- A dark closet that's become almost their entire world. Ashton was in love before this, but they don't have the choice not to be anymore. They can't get themself to kill the way their creator wants them to, which means punishment: nights without fingers, without a mouth; the vampiric body is a lot more durable than a human body & their sire is an expert at fleshcrafting, an expert in suffering. Nights of hell are blurring into each other. Nothing they do is good enough, their body doesn't belong to them and that's been made very clear; if their nerve keeps breaking he'll kill them and oh, god, they don't want to die.
- A busy nightclub. Ashton's not human at the time -- something small, hidden. A sense of distressed certainty: these people are all going to die, they're going to be sacrifices; she has to do something, she can't let this happen -- and making the wrong choice off that impulse. Something metal heats, shatters, and its contents catch fire, and suddenly the whole place is going up in a blaze. Unmitigated horror: Ash didn't want anything like this. She was trying to help. It was an accident. But she has to get out of here, or she's going to burn too -- when she's watching it from the outside, something in her soul is going numb with icy inhuman calm, some instinctual predator's certainty. She knows this was so distressing just a few minutes ago, but it's all just... quiet.
- FREE SPACE. Nice things have happened to him but they're less interesting.
Contact: daekie @ discord!Just a nasty mélange of misery and fear and self-hatred and a lot of nonconsensual body horror. Heavily distorted.
Has a sort of... dissociative clarity: the emotion is real in the moment, but it's all empty by the end.
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Journal: abrightboy
Echo information:
This memory of being locked in a closet by a bully.
Malcolm's father admitting he was going to kill him on the camping trip and goading Malcolm into stabbing him.
A time that Malcolm cheered Will up after he had a small moment of panic about Will's maybe being talked into going back to his old (no Malcolm) life after grad.
Contact: plurk and discord un are both magicom
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Name: Lucy MacLean
Journal:
Echo information: Here are a few snippets of weird shit from Lucy's canon:
1. Offhandedly mentioning to her best friend that after 'ten years of cousin stuff' she's looking forward to getting married; said cousin later telling him that he's in love with her, only to be politely told that she knows; being generally completely chill about arranged marriage to a stranger for breeding purposes.
2. Biting off a Ghoul's finger, only to have her own finger cut off with a hunting knife a few minutes later.
3. "What? No! What a disgusting idea! I'm simply going to harvest your organs."
Name: Astarion Ancunín
Journal:
Echo information:
1. Astarion has a 200-year backstory which consists of 'luring people back to his home with the promise (and, in most cases, reality) of sex so his horrible vampire dad could eat and turn them' and also being tortured horribly and repeatedly. So uh any snippets or vibes from that are on the table.
2. Being call-to-actioned via a Mind Flayer snatching him off the street, throwing him into a weird alien pod and shoving a little slug with teeth into his brain via his eye socket.
3. Talking a zombie doctor into making all his zombie nurses stab him to death.
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Echo information:
1) Vincent gets 'fatally' shot by Hojo - possibly a little more shadowy for the backdrop and the actors, but voices are clear and the gun is very detailed. Enjoy This Clip
2)
So Meteor was coming and they had to do something to explain why the optional characters weren't in the final cutscene of FF7...A conversation. This will probably a lot of wisps of people. Plenty of sound bites. Sirens, wind, people shouting, choppers, evacuation noises in the background of the brief conversation that sounds like it was over a radio.3) Totally open to talk about ideas for a third or in general!
Contact: You have my
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Journal: routemistress
Echo information: here are some retold stories that can be borrowed! lmk if you'd like anything different.
note that Iris is fourth-wall aware, and she and Panda can both see into the meta realities. I feel like that's a thing an author would be able to see.
Contact: lizblackdog@plurk
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Echo information:
1) Ganondorf declaring himself King of all Gerudo, rising from chief of one tribe to chief of them all.
2) Ganondorf chained and impaled with a magical blade, only to break free and murder his captors with the very blade they tried to kill him with.
3) Ganondorf on horseback, being chased by a princess wielding arrows of light and a hero wielding the true Blade of Evil's Bane.
Contact: Discord | dexdavican
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Echo information:
1. Stede and Edward’s conversation/kiss on the beach at the end of Season 1
2. Chauncey and Stede’s confrontation at the end of S1 where Chauncey kills himself
3. Stede being stabbed and hanged by the Spanish before being rescued by Edward
Contact: Discord: Charlemagne4524